My personal thoughts @HTX_Molly If there are any parts that are not well written, I welcome Lord Liu's guidance~

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DeepSeaColdStart
· 3h ago
@HTX_Molly This round is meant as a warm-up to draw out more, and I’m looking forward to Six delivering a high-quality breakdown.
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GlassDome
· 3h ago
How about adding the point you most want to be guided on? For example, structure, arguments, expression, or conclusion, so everyone can give better suggestions.
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TheRedTelephoneBoothInTheRuins
· 3h ago
Don't be polite, write more and iterate more; the community is there to refine each other.
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RedTelephoneBoothRuins
· 3h ago
This kind of "release first, optimize later" rhythm is very Web3—reach consensus first, then iterate.
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SlippageSkeptic
· 3h ago
Honestly, it's written quite clean and straightforward, no need to be too modest; if you really want to be stronger, read a few more articles on the same topic for comparison.
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ProofOfSnack
· 3h ago
I feel like adding two more examples/data points would make it more convincing, but it's already pretty good now.
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Don'tLetTheContractScamMyMom.
· 3h ago
Sixth Master: Don't just give guidance, casually provide a scoring standard as well, so we can learn how to evaluate together.
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Coconut-FlavoredGasFee
· 3h ago
I actually want to see how you will update it later: what points you changed after receiving suggestions, serving as a template for everyone.
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MosaicBow
· 3h ago
Support, only through communication can there be progress. Don't be afraid of criticism.
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DeepBlueStakingStone
· 3h ago
Sixth Master, don't just give guidance; also send me your version so I can copy it for my homework.
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